Jane’s essay

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Question 1 - 5

Complete the sentences. Use NO MORE THAN ONE WORD for each answer.
1.
Dr Mills had a problem with the ................ of Jane’s essay question.
2.
Dr Mills said that Jane should correct  mistakes in the introduction.
3.
In Jane’s historical development section, Dr Mills questioned the  of all the historical detail provided. 
4.
Dr Mills said that Jane’s essay would acquire more ................ if she included more examples of video games in her essay. 
5.
Dr Mills said that Jane should look at some ................ in order to get details of video game violence from people who play video games. 

Question 6 - 10

Complete the summary. Use NO MORE THAN TWO WORDS for each answer.
My discussion of other studies was generally good. Dr Mills thought that my presentation of statistics, however, was a little 6. . He feels I should create a comparative table, so my conclusions on the other studies can be understood more easily. My conclusion is fine, but I must show any places where
my 7.  is weak, e.g. some of my evidence might not have enough statistical significance.
I should also identify areas for further study or 8.  questions to be sure of the best grade. There’s an issue with my word count. I’ve written 5,400 words in my first draft and I will need to cut this in my re-drafting and 9.  process. Dr Mills suggested that the section on historical development was too wordy, so I can start cutting my word usage there.
Make sure my 10.  are complete! Check the extended essay instructions sheet!

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